Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Broadcast Style Exercise-Revised

We all like a Cinderella story, we thought we had that story this Sunday at the Nike Women's Marathon in San Francisco. A non-elite runner ran the fastest time and thought she had won the race.
Arien O’Connell, knew it was her race when she started that morning, but she did not list herself as an elite runner. Because of this the officials dismissed her case and gave her winning title to an elite runner. 
Dan Hirsch said, if you’re feeling like you’re going to be a leader, you should be in the elite package. According to O’Connell she feels as if the association is saying it is her fault because she was being modest. Because the association had already declared the winner, O’Connell will not be our Cinderella.

1 comment:

camccune said...

This is somewhat better, but it's still not in broadcast format (ALL CAPS). The "elite runner" part is not clear, and you don't tell me who Dan Hirsch is (so why would I care what he says?).

8+2=10/15