It appears that you've given me the headline, not the lead. Please include the lead so I review it.
Also, for this assignment, I asked you to find "two examples of leads that are not basic/summary news leads. It appears that the first lead you've cited is a summary lead.
My name is Sarah and I am a Public Relations major. I just got married at the beginning of the year. I have a year and a half until I can graduate and hopefully start a career( or a family :)!
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It appears that you've given me the headline, not the lead. Please include the lead so I review it.
Also, for this assignment, I asked you to find "two examples of leads that are not basic/summary news leads. It appears that the first lead you've cited is a summary lead.
Please revise and republish.
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