Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Lead 1 Revised

A couple was awarded $150,000 in damages. Last March, in Butte County they suffered injuries due to a traffic accident.

Another snowstorm is expected to hit the Sierra's today. This is part of a series of snowstorms.

Three firefighters were injured while they were helping evacuate 41 families from a fire at 204 Union Ave. which roared through the six story building.

1 comment:

camccune said...

Better! 8+1=9/10

You can further improve the first lead by combining your two sentences into one: A local couple was awarded $150,000 in damages in Butte County Court today for injuries they suffered in a March traffic accident.