A Landing tower employee spotted smoke near the wheels of Flight 428. The evacuation was at Municipal Airport in La Crosse, Wisconsin.
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Don't start with your lead with the "when" or "where" of a story. Start with the most important and/or interesting info, generally the "who" and/or "what" of the story.
Combine your three sentences into one sentence. You can do that if you figure out what information doesn't need to be in the lead. (Hint: the flight number can come later.)
7/10 - Please revise and republish this assignment. Add the word "revision" to the title so I can spot it and reevaluate it.
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